Saturday, December 2, 2006

Zipped - a poem after Kelly Tinker

Andrew Frueh


Telling Kelly's story "Zipped" as a poem
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Sitting at the foot of the stair
and on the phone
with the doctor's office drone
reflecting off the walls of my brain
while above childs hands slide around on my scalp
and probe to reveal the source of my pain
a seam is discovered
and as it's uncovered
the children say "Dad, it's a Zipper!"

It's a shell that I wear
that they peel away
and drop in a heap at the top of the stair
then we three children descend
in games I'd long forgotten to play
until suddenly later that day
the world of grown-ups sent their thunderbolt singing
an abrupt siren's song on a telephone ringing

and so we run back up the stair
to see if after a whole day of playing
that old rubber grown-up suit
is something that I am still able to wear

2 comments:

Carole Free said...

You already know that I think your writing is wonderful. Kelly's story is charmed by your poem. You managed to keep the nuts and bolts and make your own voice heard. The ideas you are trying on are like the suit lying on the floor. Your floor is covered in suits, all of which fit you beautifully. Love, MO

the Hought said...

Your mom is right, this works wonderfully to capture whatever meat hangs in my story while never straying from the voice you have developed in your own writing (especially so in regards to your poetry, your poems always do so much to reflect your own...well, I don't know what it is...so I shall call it Sha-Zam. Your poetry really makes me FEEL the Sha-Zam that is Andrew.)

I love it. Cheers!